Will You Please Be Quiet, Please, Raymond Carver
Read: 3 September to 11 September 2012
4.5 / 5 stars
This has been one of the
most rewarding, most enjoyable years I've had in more than two decades
of being an insatiable reader. I've discovered new authors to idolize,
fallen even harder for longstanding heroes, experienced the rabid glee
of revisiting much-loved works and immersed myself in genres that I
suddenly cannot live without. Unfortunately, the awe of January's
introduction to the raw beauty of Raymond Carver (who has forever
changed my interest in and opinion of short stories for the better with
his mastery of the medium) fell by the wayside as I became increasingly
besotted with the way post-modernism blew apart everything I thought I
knew about my bookish taste.
What a delight it was to return to
the terse, hyper-reality of Carver's deceptively short and tightly
structured snapshots of life. My wariness of short stories stems from
reading too many undeveloped or overwrought examples of it; Carver,
however, is the king of cramming years of quiet suffering into an
eight-page story, of building agonizing suspense in a matter of lines,
of making the reader feel every aching pang of every one of his
characters. That doesn't sound terribly delightful, does it? But it is.
It so is. Because not one of these fictional feelings that evoke
real-life responses comes even close to the conflicted bliss of losing
oneself in page after minutely crafted page of brilliant, profoundly
disquieting storytelling. Neither wishing a story would end so these
characters could be put out of their misery while also not
wanting to get closer to finishing one of Carver's precious few works
nor the growing knot in my stomach while reading some of these stories
kept me from rolling around in his words with nerdy abandon.
I
wasn't as universally drawn to the characters in these stories as I was
with What We Talk About When We Talk About Love: There seemed to be
more Domestic Strife With Children (which I can't relate to) in this
collection and the instances of people being less than awesome to
animals (which I can't deal with) automatically turned me off a little
bit. But that's really where my petty complaints stop.
Most of
these stories felt like those moments of stark clarity right before the
shit hits the fan, when a carpet stain or isolated section of tablecloth
pattern is your entire field of vision because it's the only thing
keeping your world together with its desperate normalcy. It captures
those moments that become significant not for what they are but rather
for what they're a prelude to. And I love that so many of these taciturn
tales start like an establishing shot before slowly zeroing in on the
heart of the matter with an intimidating combination of misdirection,
back story and realism to underscore the rising action that's typically
outside the scope of these stories. Carver shows
that there's so much more than the traditional climax of a story, that
sometimes the rising action is more indicative of the resolution than
anything else. There are so many directions for the narrative to go as
Carver keeps fine-tuning its path, usually arriving at an ending
drenched with hopelessness and only one logical, deftly implied
conclusion. It's a morbid celebration of how all these tiny moments
comprise the bigger picture and determine the trajectory of a life.
The
juxtaposition of the stories' unusual focal points (chopping wood,
aimless wandering, awkward small talk) against very relatable troubles
(children's skirmishes that call for adults' intervention, unhappy
marriages, occupational dissatisfaction, feeling like the American Dream
is always juuuuust out of reach) is the best kind of
understatement. Even with my favorite literary device being expertly
executed over and over again, what I found especially interesting was
that all these little details concerning everything BUT the very unhappy
elephant in the room offered such a vivid contrast between the way
people lived in the '60s and '70s compared to the way we live now: So
much has changed in the world and absolutely nothing has changed about
the human condition. I'd be willing to bet that Carver's legacy will
include the way his writing both serves as a time capsule of human
sadness and offers irrefutable evidence that quiet misery is modern
society's major linking factor because we've all been keenly acquainted
with any five emotions tearing through these pages at some point in our
pasts.
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